Over a few moments, fifteen maybe, jotted down these lyrics for a new song, this based on a kind of movie scene, movie plot basis teaser, but also having that general connection, the kind like when you see or briefly encounter someone that just totally overwhelms you, then that person leaves suddenly, and you wished you'd taken the opt to get a chance to introduce yourself, or if you'd done that, to arrange to see them again somehow, but now you're left with nothing but a feeling of regret of loss.
Hot on the Trail ( of Love )
by Carman N. Keddy, May 5th, 2008
( first quick jotdown of lyrics - i.e. not rigorously edited, or even edited at all, yet )
Hot on the trail of love
gotta keep going on
picking up all the clues
else the trail will go cold, and
I'll be left out in the cold,
the cold cold night, tonight
baby this place was so hot
when you came inside
who was that gal
she rocked my world so (hard)
that mystery woman
shared a glance and a kiss
why did she leave so soon
in such a hurry to go go
leaving me standing there
at the swanky cocktail bar
at a loss for words, for my soul
picking up the pieces
of my shattered glass
..dripping wine..
oh
who was that gal
she rocked my world so (hard)
Oh I must know know who
who was this woman in blue
what was her secret under her shadow veil
why did she whisper so sweet in my ear
there'd be danger if I only knew, if I only knew,
why was there a tear in her eye
and then how she sadly smiled,
tearing out my heart for her
oh
who was that gal
she rocked my world so (hard)
..Oh, she must have known, I'd come..
Hot on the trail of love
gotta keep going on and on
picking up all the clues
else the trail will go cold, and
I'll be left out in the cold,
the cold cold night, tonight
baby this place was so hot
when you came inside.
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Now for your extra lyrics BONUS TRACK, of sorts.. . Instead of having to make a second post, thought I'd post the second song lyrics I written today right on heels of the one above ( seem to have been doing that doubling up type of spurt lately ).. . Anyway, here's the second song's lyrics ( it supposed to be earthly gothic in nature rather than on some spiritual plane, kind of in a superheroness meets supervillainess vein... ).
Fall ( ..or possibly instead: Disbelieving Eyes )
( by Carman N. Keddy, May 5th, 2008 )
She's scanning the horizon now
for that blazing ray of light
to shine in her future nights !
She's forever dwelling now
in a deepest dark ray of night
it blots out her future light !
Expect the spectacular babe
thats all I gotta say I said to her
but she said no, it can't be so
you can't remake this
broken twisted heart, this
fallen angel here in your arms.. .
And how she looked at me
with those disbelieveing eyes!
Oh how baby how she'll be surprised
when it all comes down..
she'll be looking up at the sky
shielding her disbelieving eyes!
And she'll be ever more
scanning the horizon now
again and again
for the return, the return
of the ray of blazing light
in that deepest dark future night
that's befallen her -
since she turned away
her disbelieving eyes !
How how she'll wait everynight for more
but it'll be too late, the light has passed
away from her, her chance is gone
but then again hope is never gone
just maybe just maybe, just maybe
that ray of light will return and save her
her tormented soul but would she still
turn away, look at me, with those
disbelieving eyes, thinking she'd still
bring me down, thinking I would fall
Fall with her
Fall with her
Fall with her
..fall with her, into her abyss of endless night...
Yeah
Said I could save her from her torment
but heart-torn she hadn't wanted to,
to take me down, thought I would fall
with her into her abyss of endless night
and she didn't think I could anyway
who could be so strong.. not even you
but I wouldn't let her go, not yet, I said
expect the spectacular babe
thats all I gotta say I'd said to her, but,
she had looked at me ..still.. with those..
disbelieving eyes.. .
disbelieving eyes.. .
disbelieving eyes.. .
She's scanning the horizon now
for that blazing ray of light
to shine in her future nights
She's forever dwelling now
in a deepest dark ray of night
it blots out her future light !
Since she turned away
her disbelieving eyes !
Since she turned away
her disbelieving eyes !
Since she turned away
her disbelieving eyes !
Since she turned away
her disbelieving eyes !
Her eyes.....
..thinking I, would fall fall with her..
wishing wishing wishing
wanting wanting wanting
needing needing needing
hoping hoping hoping
fearing fearing fearing
ripping ripping ripping
at her dark soul...
... that I'd !! ...
Fall for her
Fall with her
Fall for her
Fall with her
Evermore... .
Oh ah ooowww.
Her disbelieving eyes. How they tore into me too.. . So ! Couldn't let her know, maybe she'd be right all along !! Be taking me down. And I'd so so SO far...
Fall.
Fall.
Fall.
Right down into her disbelieving eyes.
Evermore.
Her disbelieving eyes.. Her disbelieving eyes. Her disbelieving eyes. Fall into her disbelieving arms, evermore.. Her disbelieving eyes. Fall. Fall. Fall. Fall. Fall. Fall............. .
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