Monday, May 19, 2008
My write a new song a day Marathon (..it's begun today) blog site...
It's here: http://ckslatesthitsonglyrics.blogspot.com/
Saturday, May 17, 2008
Have id to shoot openning SUNMAN debut movie scene so backers will see... this Sunman's gonna be a big mega hit, dawgs !!
So I was thinking, hey I could do that, shoot a representation of the openning scene, the first few minutes from my Sunman feature motion picture, intended WIDE RELEASE, debut screenplay. While it's not gonna have a big shoot em up ole fight scene like the openning of the Matrix, it'll show some of the atmospheric and stylish envelopment leading into the movie's plot (..could throw in a quick teaser flash ahead to the driving essense of the plot too..), and the charismatic nature of Sky, and the engaging interplay of the few, actually 5 in all characters, as represented in the openning scene. This I could show to potential investors. It wouldn't give away the entire movie, to the public, that is, as things do tend to leak out, eh, yet, it'll give a compelling flavor as to who these characters are, and why the public will dig 'em !!
While the W bros had 1 million to lay down for their 4 minute slice of Matrix, I could do a representative ( not having the actors as to be actually chosen for the roles, just stand-ins... ) few minutes slice of the debut Sunman movie for near next to nothing, relatively speaking, indeed, even be able to do several different takes of it, standpoint wise, what with alternative framing choices, and this or that tweaking around. Since, what's involved in this openning scene is fairly down to Earth basic stuff, and it's mainly here about the characters, the acting, interplay and the stylistic atmospherics, energy - an emotional setting up of the milieu for what will happen later. Even could first start out with only the most basic of all representative takes with a simple table read, or acted read, of this openning segment, with perhaps some backdrop narrative, or text-over, to evoke the otherwise unseen setting.
Could even remotely have the scenes shot on near identical locations as to be used in the movie, by getting this openning scene shot in Californa ( where right now I'm not.. ) using a guest director...., him/she and I corresponding back and forth, exchanging clips etc. .
So I could pass along this scene to this stand-in director, tell him/her what setting backdrop is needed, have him/her scout out representative actor fill-ins, discuss framing, atmospherics wanted, character points, looks, yada yada. And then get that scene shot right there in the near actual environment of the movie that's to go to the cinemas later. Maybe could collab with say someone like say a Jason Reitman to get this done.
Mmm, thinking on this idea further.. there is a brothers Wachowski kind of wrinkle, my first superhero SUNMAN PREQUEL movie project which is mostly now an outline of key plotpoints, and of journey destinations and plot events to be encompassed, does though have some of the openning scenes written for it by moi. And in the openning scene for this there is some nifty spectacular action to it.., that kind of Wach factor you might say, a-happening... .
So maybe I could also take a crack at filmming the openning scenes here... , but comparatively, this footage is gonna cost much more. Then again, there's always the barebones approach, table read and acted run-throughs, only, that could be shot in lieu of computer wizardry cgi help, and the expensive working "props", and the big, location scene, with lots of folk, things, disruptions, involved.., found in the openning scene in the PQ ( this first PQ, among the several I've planned, which takes place at a pivotol prior time in Sky's life than the actual debut Sunman origin movie, helping shape and prepare the destiny of Sky to later become the Sunman... ) .
Thursday, May 15, 2008
..next time have to do a rocker..
Song: (Only wish you came..) In Triplicate, a possible Sarah Reeves like (duet) song
After listening some to Sarah Reeves tonight ( needed some mellow tones after a chaotic day ), and wanting to use the perhaps unique song words ...in triplicate..., I jotted down the following song ( with distinct verse parts for male, female, both together ) Could all be sung all though just by a female singer alone too, if replace he, she's with just you-s ):
In Triplicate
( by Carman N. Keddy, May15th, 2008 )
..only wish you came, in triplicate...
..only wish you came, in triplicate ..
..only wish you came in triplicate ..
Oh Oh Ah...
So you could spread all the more joy
all over the world and back again
and the world would be a better place, all over everywhere
like how I feel in your arms
when you look at me that way ( or ..hold onto me.. that way )
that smoky eye ole way you do
and then say those sweet sweet things you do to me
but baby there's just only one of you
and I don't to share you with anyone
no no no not anyone...
oh lord (but) I don't want to be so selfish
but if anyone was as close to you as me ( or.. me as you )
they'd feel the exact same way as me too
Oh Oh O
only wish you came
in tripicate
tripled 3 times more
and then 3 more times..
only wish you came in triplicate
only wish you came in triplicate
only wish you came in triplicate
Oh O ah
and how she came into my world
like an angel on down from high
and she said now won't you come explore my world, too
to find out who you are (to be) to (for) me
maybe you'll just discover
just what it's like to love again
oh tempestuous fire rising, oh bequiling charms
but baby there's just only one of you
and I don't to share you with anyone
no no no not anyone...
oh lord I don't want to be so selfish, no oh
but if anyone was as close to you as me
they'd feel the exact same way as me too
only wish you came, in tripicate
tripled 3 times more
and then 3 more times..
only wish you came in triplicate
only wish you came in triplicate
only wish you came in triplicate
oh oh ah
only wish you came
in triplicate
so you could spread all the more joy
all over the world and back again
and the world would be a better place, all over everywhere
like how I feel in your arms
when you holding me me that way
that fi-re, -ey ole way you do
and then say those deep deep things you do to me
but baby there's just only one of you
and I don't to share you with anyone
no no no not anyone...
oh lord i don't want to be so selfish
but if anyone was as close to you as me ( or me as you )
they'd feel the exact same way as me too
Oh
only wish you came
in tripicate
tripled 3 times more
and then 3 more times
only wish you came in triplicate
only wish you came in triplicate
only wish you came in triplicate
oh oh ah
and how he came in my world
like an arch-angel come on down from high
and he said now won't you come explore my world, too
to find out who you are to be for me
maybe you'll just discover
just what it's like to love again
oh infestuous fire rising oh confident arms
but baby there's just only one of you
and I don't to share you with anyone
no no no not anyone...
oh lord i don't want to be so selfish
but if anyone was as close to you as me
they'd feel the exact same way as me too
Oh
only wish you came
in tripicate
tripled 3 times more
and then 3 more times
only wish you came in triplicate
only wish you came in triplicate
only wish you came in triplicate
oh oh ah
and how you came in my world
like an present from on down from high
and you said now won't you come explore my world, too
to find out who you are to be for me
maybe you'll just discover
just what it's like to love again
oh incredible light blazing oh brilliant-ly warm
but baby there's just only one of you
and i don't to share you with anyone
no no no not anyone...
oh lord I don't want to be so selfish
but if anyone was as close to you as me
they'd feel the exact same way as me too
Oh
only wish you came
in tripicate
tripled 3 times more
and then 3 more times
only wish you came in triplicate
only wish you came in triplicate
only wish you came in triplicate
oh oh ah
only wish you came in triplicate
only wish you came in triplicate
only wish you came in triplicate
oh oh oh..
... so you could spread all the more you
into the word....
oh oh oh
ah..
3 x
3x
3x
more...
more of you
into my world.... .
oh
..cause can't get enough of you..
but one of you is enough, oh so much more..
than I could ever want or need in(of) this world.. or beyond..
if just for me... if just for me... if just for me..
in singular just you.....
only you..
you...
oh oh ah.. .
Wednesday, May 14, 2008
Today's 1st new song: Top of the World (without you). Find new song, Nickolina, in the previous blog post.
Top of the World ( .. but without you .. )
by Carman N. Keddy ( May 14th , 2008 )
Oh it took so long, oh so long..
to get to the top of the world
seemed like I would never get there !
Thought we'd get there together
there's always that something,
that one big bump in the road.
That surprise twist in the plot
that you never were suspecting.. .
All the striving, the surviving .
All the time, the taking, to get to the..
Top of the world
looking down
Top of the world
only to lose you along the way..
..at the..
Top of the world
but feeling so strong
..on the ..
Top of the world
yelling out loud
.. yelling out loud without fear..., at the..
Top of the world
feeling the sun hot on my face
Top of the world
..oh, but why aren't you here with me too !!
..at the..
Top of the world
but still it feels good
Top of the world
sipping the nectar of the Gods..
..oh so good to be, at.., the..
Top of the world....
...only wish you were here with me too...
..at, the..
Top of the World
.. only one thing missing..
..one thing that's so so damn important to me ..
Top of the world
...still I got to believe you'll be joining me here soon ..
... be putting your hand back in mine again..., at...
The top of world
there's only one more thing to do
..at.., the
Top of the world..
.. and thats to reach on down to hold back unto you ..
..and bring you on up back to me...
..at, the..
The top of the world
Top of the world, with me (too..)
Top of the world
On top of the world
Top of the world
Oh..
At the top of the world
still a teardrop can fall
Top of the world
but it still feels good
..to be, at..
The top of the world
Top of the word.
At the top of the world.
( but) without you.....
...oh, how could i have lost you...
... and how can I get you back, now...
.. now that I've finally arrived, at..
the top of the hill...
Oh it took so long, oh so long
to get us to the top of the world
seemed like we would never get here
thought we'd get there together
(but) there's always that moment
that one big fight on the road
that hidden pitfall in the novel
that I never thought be happening
all the striving, the surviving ( ..that we did together )
all the time, the taking to get us to the.. ( but it took such a toil on you, too big a toil on us... )
.. so I'm now so alone..
.. but still so hopefull, at, the..
Top of the world
looking down
Top of the world
only to lose you along the way..
..at, the..
Top of the world
and feeling so strong
Top of the world
and breaking down....
..on the..
Top of the world
yelling out loud..
...AT THE TOP OF MY LUNGS
LIKE A WOLF HOWLING WILD n FREE AT THE MOON
YELLING OUT so so loud FOR YOU....
Top of the world
feeling the sun so hot on my face
Top of the world
..but why aren't you here with me too..
Top of the world
but still it feels so good
oh so good to be, at..
The top of the world....
only wish you were here with me too...
Top of the world
still I believe you'll be joining me here soon
... put your hand in mine again..., at...
The top of world
..there's only one more thing I need, so need, to do
..at.., the
Top of the world..
..and that's to reach on down to hold back unto you..
Oh, bring you on up.. to me, at
the top of the world !!
Top of the world, with me (too..)
top of the world
On top of the world
top of the world
At the top of the world
still a teardrop can fall..
Top of the world
but it still feels so so good..
..to be, at..
The top of the world.
oh.. at, the
Top of the world
but I still so need and want you..
...cause I don't always want to be so alone at..
Top of the world
without you
..at,the ..
Top of the world
without you..
Top of the world
without you..
Top of the world
would be so much better..
oh, to be, at..
The top of the world with you
The top of the world with you
Top of the world with you.
oh I wish I was on..
On the top of the world with you... !
Top of the world
top of the world
top of the world....
Top of the world
without you
Top of the world
..would so rather be with you, together..
..at..., the..
Top of the world
Top of the world
..at, the..
Top of the world, now...
At the top of the, at the top of the, at the top od the world, now
without her...
Top of the world
the world
the world
the world
..spinning dizzy around the world in my soul (or head),
without you...
.. feeling lost walking around the top of the world..
..without you..
.. at the top of the world.....
Without you
without you
without you
Top of the world
but without you, and missing you..
Top of the world
..but oh I still want you, so badly..
Top of the world
..but I so need you to be here with me..
Top of the world
top of the world
top of the world....
Top of the world
top of the world
top of the world
Tuesday, May 13, 2008
new song Nickelina, in progress, still working on shaping this one all together... .
NICKOLINA ( or just the song whose name sounds like Nickolina or Nickelina depending upon whatever the heck way you want to sing or pronounce it..... )
( by Carman N. Keddy, May 13th, 2008 )
--------- a next day (May 14th) thought ------, it might be greeaaaat ( as Tony the Tiger might say.. ) if this song can be totally turned on it's head and instead of being Neil Diamond ish instead be a real all out rocker, given that treatment, by a band say like 3 Doors Down - I'm hearing inside my head right now a crazy greeaat version of this that a band like that could do... .
.... as previously noted ( ie., on same first written day, May 13th, 08 )
- I'm not sure how closely or not, some of these lines, mainly parts of the chorus may resemble other songs, if so, then I'll likely change those parts as much as I can - also just generally likely be working more on this to get it all shaped up nicely. )
( May also try to make it not so... final..., this relationship also..., something less than a fatal car crash separating them now... , or not.., anyway song's supposed to sound cheery rousing enough, regardlessly... )
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NICKOLINA ( or just the song whose name sounds like Nickolina or Nickelina depending upon whatever the heck way you want to sing or pronounce it..... )
( by Carman N. Keddy, May 13th, 2008 )
You're my sky bound sweet
dripping honey from a golden time
a real starmaker woman, of me
the seventh, eigth, ninth wonder
of this world of mine i live in..
I think i can even see your shining star
floating up there, out in the milky way
tonight beaming so bright down on me oh
so warmly... this summer night oh, on the river.
I can still remember, remember when
of yesterday's bubbling wine we sipped
from your silk slipper on our wedding day.
What it was like when
you made me happy, then, then and now...
Oh so happy
all of the time
we were together
you make me so happy, now
oh so happy
all the time
we spend together
..in my dreams at night still...
Nickelina
Nicklelina
there was never a girl, a woman, a good time, like...
Nickelina
Nickelina
Nickelina
..there was never nights so fabulously, so fabulously fine, so fine
than my nights spent with her..
With...
Nickelina
Nickelina
...she'll always be inside my heart
beating right along beside mine
every ticktock of the clock
I will remember fondly...
oh so deeply breathe again..
like I was twenty-one all over
of the nectar of the oh so swell..
oh so swell...
Nickelina
Nickelina
nickelina
...never be the like of her again..
not in this wide wide world..., of mine, for me.
Was there ever a time
so special, so lovely
it's not only this time of year
it's what I see in your eyes
what I feel in your touch, in my dreams
when you reach out to me
to hold me oh so tenderly with love
oh for this ragged common man
who's very most special thing
in the whole wide world is you, is you
and the rose sweet (scent) smelling air tonight
just reminds me so much of you
Nickelina
...will you be waiting there for me
oh it's eveything I pray for now
it's everything that carries me on, and on, and on..
to be another day closer to you, oh yeah...
To Nickelina
yeah for fun fun fun,
Nickellina
...the only woman I loved
heart and soul and mind
with everthing a man could give
I gave it all to her, and she gave me back more
oh so so so much more....
it carries me, these weary feet
that want to dance once more on air, with...
Nickelina
..will you be waiting there for me
oh it's eveything I pray for now
it's everything that carries me on, and on, and on..
to be another day closer to you, oh yeah...
you made me happy, then, and now...
oh so happy
all of the time
we were together
you make me so happy, now
oh so happy
all the time
we spend together
..in my dreams at night still...
Nickelina
Nicklelina
there was never a girl, a woman, a good time, like...
Nickelina
nickelina
nickelina
there was never nights so fabulously, so fabulously fine, so fine
than my nights spent with her
with...
nickelina
nickelina
was a time me in my orange muscle Gt
you in your red mustang, free to the wind
we were shooting for the moon that night
you were going somewhere near
where the water ran, to meet me here
by the river whose pulse runs blue
oh why do dreams come crashing down...
on me and..
nickeline
nickelina
nickelina
just glad to still have her around
in my dreams at night, always in my heart..
nickelina
nickelina
my nickelina...
Sunday, May 11, 2008
Wrote couple new songs - thematically merge together like basis for budding new Rock Opera aka like LLoyd Webber - also got 2nd use in mind
2 New Songs for a would be Broadway, eh? Andrew Lloyd Webber / Ne-Yo..., Rock Opera, but in a hiphop sense..., to be called SUPERSTAR!!, or.., She's a Superstar.. .
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Will Go On
( by Carman N. Keddy. May 11th, 2008 )
I will go on
without you
but I won't like (dig) it
I will move on
without you
but I'll still be feeling it
..this pain and hurt of
losing you..
Yes
I may be fine
without you
but it will take time..
0
Yea, awhile longer....
I may be crazy
without you, now.. (..still crazy with love for you..)
but I still believe, in it
What we had, together
I will hang on
without you
but when I look into the mirror
I will still see your eyes
looking right through me
for the last time...
Now in the rock opera sort of scenario, the previous song above ( representing a future flash ahead ) subsides, merging seamlessly right into the (past) of this next song .. :
( She's a ) Superstar
- By Carman N. Keddy, May 11th, 2008 )
Superstar
superstar
superstar
superstar
Oh she's a superstar
Superstar
superstar
superstar
yes, she's a great big superstar
superstar, superstar.......
So ohh...
will she see nicely of me
in her eyes
she's a superstar
she'll look sharply as she always does
oh so hotly oh so hotly, how..
will she call gently me back,
into her arms
she's a superstar
will I go gladly with her
to her lair
she's a superstar ( going her own way )
yes for sure....
will I be messing (up) her hair
in her bed
she's a superstar .. ( passing time )
will we be clearly this night
... having the sweetest fun this side of heavan ... yeah.
oh
she's a superstar ( what does she see in me?? )
oh will she look kindly on me
for her (pleasure..) ...needs, again...
she'll seem irrestibly as she always does
oh so hotly so hotly, hotly yeah
her body, her smile, her touch, her vibe..
oh, she's a superstar ( but she's like everyone, too )
yea for sure
maybe that's why she's so into me
cause I know there's so much more, to her
not all the trapping of fame and fortune, no..
she's got a good heart inside after all...
beyond all the glitter it's just the show
that's gotta keep going on going on, going on, cause
she's a superstar ( got an entourage )
she's a superstar ( passing by )
and I am here for her...
oh, she's a superstar ( but she's like everyone else too)
oh she's a superstar ( candle burning so brightly yeah )
oh so will tonight..
will..she still see nicely of me
in her eyes
she's a superstar ( so easy to forget, who you are )
she'll look sharply as she always does
oh so hotly oh so hotly, oh so hotly yeah..
she's a superstar ( can have anyone, in the world... )
will she call gently me back,
into her arms
she's a superstar ( but again she comes back for me )
will I go gladly with her
to her lair
she's a superstar ( going her own way )
yes for sure....
will I be messing (up) her hair
in her bed
she's a superstar .. ( passing time )
will we be clearly this night
... having the sweetest fun, the sweetest fun this side of heavan ..., yeah.. .
yes we surely will if..
she don't forget she's more...
.. more than just a superstar...
.... and that she's my gal...
forever long as she keeps coming back for more, of me
yes the not so complicated gal I love so much
cause I know she's such a sweetheart, yeah really so
hidding beneath her dark fashionable sunglassess from Dior
and the flashing glare of these papperazzi hounds..
but oh she's a superstar ( got lots on her mind )
Oh..
..so..
Will she look (..once more so..) kindly on me
for her (pleasure..) ...needs, one more time again...
- oh she knows I'm here, forever for her -
she'll seem irrestibly as she always does
oh so hotly so hotly, oh so hotter more yeah..
her body, her smile, her touch, her vibe..
oh, she's a superstar ( but she's like everyone too )
yea for sure
but she's..
she's a superstar
she's a superstar
she's a superstar
... and only time will tell...
yeah..
she's a superstar
she's a superstar
she's a superstar
...and who am I to hold a special place in her heart and soul ....
but ...does her public need her more, no, no, no.., no yeah
... so I will always be here, be here just for her ..
whenever she comes back around, looking just for me
cause I don't only just see that...
she's a superstar
she's a superstar
she's a superstar
cause I know she's so much more that that, yo.. .
oh
she's a superstar
she's my superstar
she's a superstar
she's my superstar
0 o o o o o o............
Superstar
superstar
superstar
superstar
Oh she's a superstar
Superstar
superstar
superstar
yes, she's a great big superstar
superstar, superstar.......
O o o o o o..............
Saturday, May 10, 2008
My email sent to THE SUN re: exclusive SUNMAN projects info PLUS!! new song I wrote today: Today, I Will Live !!
Hi, The Sun.
Curiously enough, we do share something alike, namely our connection to the icon of the : SUN.
I understand that you pay top dollar for exclusive stories especially those in the entertainment field.
I've been trying awhile to get my original new superhero SUNMAN (TM) based movie projects realized. My current personal situation is such that it makes it difficult for me to accomplish this. And I am currently in need of some financial resources in order to help enable myself to tackle this task. And some publicity and spotlight wouldn't hurt either... .
This could be a human interest story, a kind of steadfast Rocky like story on the angle of a starving artist type of scenario -no I am not living out on the streets, but instead living with my elderly 88 year old parent ( taking care of her ) with scarse available household keeping income. I'm also living currently a far piece away from Hollywood ( namely Halifax, Nova Scotia, Canada ) though my Sunman (tm) figure is based in California - that's his home "base" and his normal realm / location / loci of action, and that's where too I need to get based in order to conduct and shoot the Sunman (tm) feature motion picture productions.
So I am otherwise oppressed by the lack of resources needed for myself to acheive my goals of a wide release feature motion pictures featuring my superhero figure SUNMAN ( my registered TM, Canada and the U.S. ). For one, I don't want to relinquish control over my superhero figure to a major studio concern in that I want to be able to ensure the ongoing intigrity of this figure, and this franchise, one of my primary objectives. None of those horrendous Batman later sequels, thank you !
Plus my superhero Sunman (tm) figure is to stand up for certain themes, traits, and oppose institutional injustices or areas of possible current and future societal concern ( although he is by no means a perfect figure, he has his own inner qualms and foiable characteristics, human weaknesses ), that a major Hollywood studio would likely sully in some way or other.
And yes, as you'll likely want to know, there will be extremely " hot babes", and occassional handsome dashing "dudes" character roles to be featured in the world of superhero Sunman amid the storylines.
Or, you might want to have access to SUNMAN based project exclusives as they develop. Think of what it'll be worth to have an ongoing innermost bead in on the Spiderman, or Superman, or Batman franchises, and in this case SUNMAN, a figure for whom I'm aiming to achieve a similar success plateau. Now I wouldn't be wanting to reveal details on the actual storylines of the debut Sunman feature film project itself (wanting to keep the debut of SUNMAN a fresh surprise to be revealed at the time of the release of the debut feature motion picture), except maybe some points about the figure deemed to be suitable to be released, but instead could provide exclusives about things like who might be tapped to star in this production ( I've in mind right now one major star for a supporting role ), interview ops with them, how things are proceeding, maybe some tidbit candid shots of this and that. And things like exclusive alerts as to what mega singing star or group is being tapped to do a Sunman theme song. Whatever like that.
My goal is to establish my company Superhero Sunman (tm) Entertainment Enterprises ( SSEE) further with enough resources as needed to enable it to cobble together the needed key production related elements, collaborations, star attachments, and human resources as required to mount the Sunman (tm) debut, feature motion picture, wide release, projects ( inc. the origins story currently based on my screenplay SUNMAN - BORN OF FIRE AND SKY - this being of course subject to ongong changes and revisions - and the first Sunman prequel storyline movie for which I've an outline on which to base this project upon ) to enable them to be realized including, again, the collaboration of production partners.
Indeed, it may well be possible to get the debut Sunman (tm) movie shot and "in the can" in time for a Christmas Holiday season roundabouts 2009 release date... .
Please do include in communications some idea as to what you might consider by way of financial embursement for these type of exclusives, so I will know whether it'll be worth my while in working with you on these matters, or alternatively with some other exclusive arrangement elsewhere.
My Regards:
Carman N. Keddy
Carman N. Keddy - originator of superhero Sunman (TM)
Superhero Sunman Entertainment Enterprises ( SSEE)
Dartmouth, Nova Scotia, Canada
The mark SUNMAN is an United States and Canadian registered trademark owned by Carman N. Keddy
P.S.: ........think J. K. Rowlings before she hit it big with her Harry Potter series ......
------------- And here's that exclusive song I just wrote ----------------
Today I Will Live !!!
( By Carman N. Keddy, May 10th, 2008 )
Out I go through the crashing surf
being towed to the thundering waves
towering so high so high over me
they block out the light of the sun behind
oh unto their slipstream backs
today I will ride, today ride, today, today (babe)
yes I will conqure all fear....
conquer all dread again.., (inside of me )
..to live.., to live.., to live !
Out on the edge.
Wat-e-ry grave's not what-I crave, .. but oh it's not ..
going be that what's cowering me
wandering so high, so high my soul
it ab-sorbs the light of the Sun above
oh into their watery jaws
today (through) I will grind, today grind, today, today
yes I will inspire all love..
inspire all the love again, inside of me
..to live..., to live.. to live !
Out on the edge.
......Oh you..
Want to save me from drowning under
being my-self in the fearlessness gave
electrifying high so high in me
en-ner-gy that might of the Sun, burning ( in-my eyes )
curl off their caressing lips
today I will ride, today ride, today today (babe)
yes I will conquer all fear..
conquer all death again. ( inside of me )
..to live.., to live.., to live !
Today I will live
today I will live
today I will live...
Out on the edge !!
Today I will conquer all the world
all the world of fear and dead,
again .
Out at the edge of this very earthbound universe
I will cry no tears.... .
Just beat the surge of the waves
pulsing through my veins... .
Today I will live
today I will live
today I will live...
Today I will feel alive.
Oh so most alive !
Out at the edge of the abyss..
But today..
I will not fall in..
It won't be today..... .
It could be today.. .
But I will fear no fear..
Cause fear's something
that just ain't inside o me... .
And..
Today I will live
today I will live
today I will live...
Out on the edge.
Today I will conquer all the world
...all the world of fear and dread,
again .
Today I will be alive.
Oh so most alive !
Out on the edge..
Out on the edge..
Over the edge..
I will go...
One more time.
Baby I am gone.
Into the sweet ocean's arms..
Don't be jealous of me
cause I'll always come
back on down to you
when the night sky falls.. ( on today... )
And Baby...
Don't be afraid for me
cause it's call-ing me
makes me who I.. am
yes the man (that) you love..
For it's today
for which we live...
For which we breathe... .
Oh I breathe inside the sky... .
Oh breathe....., to live... .
And..
Today I will live
today I will live
today I will live...
Out on the edge!
Today...
Out on the edge..
Out on the edge..
Out on the edge.....
Today.
Today I will Live...
Live.. Live.. Live... Live.. Live.. Live.. Live.......
Today I will feel alive.
Oh so most alive !
Today............ .
Thursday, May 8, 2008
The 2nd new song I wrote today: Olivia > a kind of.. what if Madonna had a conflicted inner soul and an alter ego image self...
( by Carman N. Keddy , May 8th, 2008 )
......... ok this is a huge departure for myself ( for one, I'm not a gal, whose pov this song is coming from I would assume..., and certainly not a Madonna super gal, in my case that would be guy, in that I haven't quite arrived to the very top of the world yet myself ... yet...... .)
- after listening to Madonna, her posted songs on her MySpace page, and just having had an urge to use the musial sounding name Olivia -
NOTE: don't want Madonna to take this song the wrong way, it's mainly about the struggle to try to keep relevant, fight despair, be strong, be at the top of your game.... .
OLIVIA:
Like Olivia
sophisticated lady
Like Olivia
damsel with a plan
Like Olivia
world domination with her grasp
Like Olivia
pink cocktail glass in her hand
Like Olivia
working it on the dance floor
Like Olivia
sweating it down at the gym
Like Olivia
I wanta be just like
Like Olivia
a woman in the driver's seat
Like Olivia
sees it all unfold as she saw
Like Olivia
takes a real man to satisfy her
Like Olivia
I'm following in her style
Like Olivia
swankly sure of everything
Like Olivia
does she ever cry in private
Like Olivia
stronger than a superwoman
Lke Olivia
never ever will grow old
Like Olivia
Like Olivia
Like Olivia.................
Like Olivia
I wanta be just like
Like Olivia
a woman in the driver's seat
Like Olivia
sees it all unfold as she saw
Like Olivia
I wanta be just like
Like Olivia
a woman in the driver's seat
Like Olivia
sees it all unfold as she saw
Like Olivia
I wanta be just like
Like Olivia
a woman in the driver's seat
Like Olivia
sees it all unfold as she saw
Like Olivia
Like Olivia
Like Olivia.................
Like Olivia
maybe she will even save the whole wide world
Like Olivia
all for her herself to own, all for herself to rule
Like Olivia
Like Olivia
Like Olivia.................
Like Olivia
I wanta be just like
Like Olivia
a woman in the driver's seat
Like Olivia
sees it all unfold as she saw
Like Olivia
I wanta be just like
Just....
Like Olivia.. like Olivia.. like Olivia.................
Like Olivia
does she ever cry in private...
..like I do sometimes.
Oh
Like Olivia
does she ever feel completely alone, insecure..
..like I do sometimes
When I wanta be, oh, just..., just..
Like Olivia
does she ever feel oh so small..
..like I do sometimes
No No Not... Olivia
No No Not... Olivia
No No Not... Olivia
Oh
Like Olivia
I wanta be just like
Like Olivia
a woman in the driver's seat
Like Olivia
sees it all unfold as she saw
Like Olivia
I wanta be just like
Just....
Like Olivia.. like Olivia.. like Olivia.................
( OK yes a goodly number of the repetitions represented can be dropped... )
Ambience :1st new song written today & check out Way Out California Way (see last blog post). Also had discussion on SUNMAN movie projects financing.
( by Carman N. Keddy, May 8th, 2008 ) - as influenced by the band Wintersleep -
All ambience and vapor
all ambience and steam
all ambience and red wine
all ambience and fine cruisine
all ambience and mirrors
all ambience and sweet dreams
all ambience and shadow
all ambience and glittering
all ambience with (bubbling) champaigne
all ambience and you .
All ambience and you
how can I see farther than
all ambience and you
all ambience and you .
Is your world made of more
than just a fragile painted shell
what surrounds you and me
is it you who I really feel
or do I but only see
the image of someone else
I want to make believe is mine
and not just all made of...
All ambience and vapor
all ambience and steam
all ambience and sour wine
all ambience and spoiled cruisine
all ambience and broken mirrors
all ambience and shattered dreams
all ambience and shadow
all ambience and glittering
all ambience with stale champaigne
..all ambience and you..
All ambience and you
how can I see farther than
all ambience and you
all ambience and you .
All ambience and vapor
all ambience and steam
all ambience and fine wine
all ambience and sweet cruisine
all ambience and mirrors
all ambience and giddy dreams
all ambience and shadow
all ambience and glittering
all ambience with (tingling) champaigne .
..all ambience and you..
All ambience and you
how can I see farther than
all ambience and you
all ambience and you .
Is it-a game made for me
wheel just for a spinning silver ball
what goes-round you and me
is it me who you really feel
or do you but only see
the image of someone else
you want to make believe is yours
and not just all made of...
All ambience and vapor
all ambience and steam
all ambience and sour wine
all ambience and spoiled cruisine
all ambience and broken mirrors
all ambience and shattered dreams
all ambience and shadow
all ambience and glittering
all ambience with stale champaigne
all ambience and you.. .
All ambience and you
how can I see farther than
all ambience and you
all ambience and you
All ambience and vapor
all ambience and steam
all ambience and wine
all ambience and cruisine
all ambience and mirrors
all ambience and dreams
all ambience and shadow
all ambience and glittering
all ambience with champaigne
All ambience and you .
All ambience and you
how can I see farther than
all ambience and you
all ambience and you .
Only ambience
only ambience
only ambience
only ambience... .
What we have .
Only ambience
only ambience
only ambience
only ambience...
What we share .
... Is it..., only....,
All ambience and me
all ambience and you
all ambience and us .
Oh...
.. is it, that.... ,
What we do not trust is more
just a passing beam of radiance.. .
Ambience washes away when the pale glowing lights fade out to black..........
Ambience turns to glare when the shades open wide to the harsh rays of daylight..........
But ambience is the only thing sure that binds us together like in some magic fairy tale.
All ambience and you
All ambience and you
how can I see farther than
all ambience and you .
...all ambience and you .
Only ambience
only ambience
only ambience
only ambience...
What we have .
Only ambience
only ambience
only ambience
only ambience...
What we share .
All ambience. All ambience. All ambience................ .
Wednesday, May 7, 2008
3rd new song of the day: Way Out California Way - an Eagles like Vibe to it.
Way Out California Way
( by Carman Keddy, May7-8th*, 2009 - completed it all a wee past midnight )
Under this most delectable red setting sun
that's where we finally belong
sitting pretty under a shady oak tree
that's when our souls became free
oh from our long weary journey here
swinging our bare feet
just shooting the airy breeze
caressing across our cheeks
and holding hands so innocently
laughing smiling just being giddy
oh like children carefree again
Oh why did it take us so long, ..to get..
headed way out California way
Oh why did it take us so long, ..to get..
headed way out California way..
Oh why did it take us so long, ..to get..
headed way out California way..
Out on the freeway looked out my rear view mirror
leaving New York hustle and it's canyons of steel behind
dipped down south right on by Tennessee's charm
Outta Arkansas past Oklahoma and Kansas too
over departed ground where once the Anasazi ran
passed over the mighty and strong Colorado
may it always run wild and free...
beyond the Grand Canyon's steep steep walls
past plains echoing Apache crys long gone now
through dry ole dusty Death Valley, it's solitude
watching the wind witherered bones pass by, ..we..
headed way out California way.
Oh why did it take us so long, ..to get ..
headed way out California way..
Oh why did it take us so long, ..to get ..
headed way out California way..
Oh why did it take us so long, ..to get ..
headed way out California way..
Way out way out California way
amid the olive groves and swaying palm trees
just whistling a big howdy de do
to the big ole western sky so blue
our footprints left cast in the wet oozing sand
on the sandy foot of the wide wide Pacific
idlely watching the tanned surfers ride
along the big oceans waves,
right along to their nivana they fade away..
..under the most incredible red setting sun..
Oh why did it take us so long, ..to get..
headed way out California way.
Oh why did it take us so long, ..to get ..
headed way out California way..
Oh why did it take us so long, ..to get ..
headed way out California way (.. ay, ay.. )
Under this most delectable red setting sun
that's where we finally belong
sitting pretty under a shady oak tree
that's when our souls became free
oh from our long weary journey here
swinging our bare tingling feet
just shooting the airy breeze
caressing across our cheeks
and holding hands so innocently
laughing smiling just being giddy
oh like children carefree again
Oh why did it take us so long, ..to get ..
headed way out California way..
Oh why did it take us so long, ..to get ..
headed way out California way..
Oh why did it take us so long, ..to get ..
headed way out California way.
But baby now we're here
way out California way...
Way out California way
way out Cailifornia way
way out California way...
Just wrote new songs: 101 (or, 101 Times) & the futuristic L.A. 2029 - P.S. : see previous post for 09 debut Sunman movie update.
101* (*pronouced either one hundred and one, or, one oo one, both)
or
101* TIMES (how)
( lyrics by Carman N. Keddy, May 7th, 2008 )
Sure you did me wrong
did me wrong this time, again
but I sure can remember oow
a hundred and one great times
for still loving you, now.
You worry you went
oh too far this time
pushed me over the finish line
..but baby ..
I'm a patient (wo)man, how [woman or man given who's doing this, could be done as duet..]
Cause there's at least
a hundred and one great reasons, how
I couldn't let you down
when I look at you
looking at me so..
soaking wet in the rain
It all returns in a flash
what came before.. .
what it's like right now
when you look at me so.
A hundred and one reasons, how.
Cause there's at least..
a hundred and one of the greatest times
telling me I can't let you down, now
when I look at you
looking at me so..
basking hot in the sun
It all returns in a flash
what came before.. .
what's it's like right now..
when you look at me so.
and..
Nobody's perfect
not even you
even though you look
you smell, you feel, perfect
your touch perfect, to me
certainly it's not me
who am I to judge...
But unlike those other guys (gals)
I understand I understand
when you stray when you
do me wrong..
Cause you get so confused
cause you don't know, just
what you want is too close
you get a feeling you want to roam, roam free
but my love is not a cage
someday you'll understand
someday you'll realize
what heavan and hell
you put me through...
when you look at me so.
... a hundred and one times, how
101 ( pronounced in this part: one oh one < here )
101
101
101
101
101
...times, my heart won't let you down
... at least....
101
101
101
101
101
101
...great memories, how, my arms will keep holding you, now
..holding on to..
A hundred and one fond memories
..a hundred and one times, how
my love for you will go on.
A hundred and one bittersweet times, how
101 ( pronounced in this part: one oh one < here )
101
101
101
101
...times, my heart won't let you down
... at least....
101
101
101
101
101
A hundred and one wild memories..
a hundred and one times, how
my love for you will go on.
A hundred and one times.. how
my arms would let you drown..
but my heart kept holding onto you.
- you needed me to be here for you, after all,
101 times, how -
But baby won't you try
not to push me too often too far
a hundred and one times, more..
Even a saint's got limits... owwww.
101
101
101
101
101
101
..times, my heart won't let you leave .
a hundred and one, a hundred and one, a hundred and one, a hundred and one.... beats of the clock of time
a hundred and one, a hundred and one, a hundred and one, a hundred and one... times..., to hold onto... . Of you.
101
101
101
101
101
101
101.....
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... had a hankering to do a Scifi-ish type of frenzy dancebeat song..., and after the line L.A. 2029 popped into my mind, I wrote this:
L.A. 2029
( by Carman N. Keddy, May 7th, 2008 )
Like a neverending party
lasting on and on
through the night on til
L.A. twenty twenty nine ( 2029 )
L.A. 2029..
Will anything be standing then
will the music be still playing on
to some amazing future beat
will the laser ray fantastix 3d future
find us there still dancing here
cheek to cheek, fingertips touching
hips rotating wild, giving it all up
to the music, to the primal heat ('n sound)
like we're all in the matrix
the whole human race dancing
just before the end of time
the war machines roaring near
aiming to tear the doors down
...aiming to tear the doors down..
on the neverending party
in L.A. 2029
L.A. 2029
On the never everlasting party
going on and on
through the night on til
L.A. 2029
...aiming to tear the doors down..
on the neverending party
in L.A. 2029
L.A. 2029
L.A. 2029..
will anything be standing then
will the music be still playing on
to some amazing future beat
will the laser light fantastix 3d future
find us there still dancing here
cheek to cheek, fingertips touching
hips rotating wild, giving it all up
to the music, to the primal heat ('n sound)
like we're all in the matrix
the whole human race dancing
just before the end of time
the war machines roaring near
aiming to tear the doors down
...aiming to tear the doors down..
on the neverending party
in L.A. 2029
L.A. 2029
On the never everlasting party
going on and on
through the night on til
L.A. 2029
...aiming to tear the doors down..
on the neverending party
in L.A. 2029
L.A. 2029
L.A. 2029..
Will any-trees be breathing still
will our heart-beats still be grooving on
to some broiling future hot, ..oh so burning.., so bistering hot ..
will the laser ray fantastix 3d future, blazin
find us there still dancing here
cheek to cheek, fingertips touching
hips rotating wild, giving it all up
to the music, to the primal fire ('n loud)
like we're all in-side a (disaster) movie
the whole human race dancing wild
just before the end of time
the doom machines roaring near
aiming to tear the doors down...
...on the rusting remains of:
L.A. 2029
...on the choking planet of:
L.A. 2029
...on the endless wars of:
L.A. 2029
...on the furtive souls of:
L.A 2029
.. on the blazing hopes still left inside of:
L.A. 2029
...hoping to keep the music going..
on the neverending party
in L.A. 2029
L.A. 2029
On the never everlasting party
going on and on
through the night on til
L.A. 2029...
...aiming to keep the fire burning..
on the neverending party
in L.A. 2029
L.A. 2029
L.A. 2029
L.A. 2029
L.A. 2029
L.A. 2029
..future so bright there...
..future so nice there...
..future so night there...
..night so fright there...
But the beat, it'll pound on and on
...whichever way it goes....
Like a neverending party
lasting on and on
through the night on til
L.A. twenty twenty nine ( 2029 )
L.A. 2029
L.A. 2029
L.A. 2029
L.A. 2029
L.A.
L.A.
L.A.
L.A.
2029
2029
2029
2029.....
on and on..
Re: 2009 SUNMAN (tm) debut movie release
Tuesday, May 6, 2008
The lyrics wrote yesterday: Dance Riot, Fall (Disbelieving Eyes), On The Trail (of Love), & today: Just Like When.
superhero SUNMAN (tm) seeks production partners.. wants to rival Marvel, Warners, yada yada... .
Basically to get initially in through the door in this field would suffice. Sequels have proven to make that later biggest bang anyway. Plus a much bigger debut remake could be done subsequently. It's possible a superhero Sunman debut movie could be made with $35 million or less, a figure that's desired by distributors, with regards to movies other than the mega cost major studio productions like Ironman.
I think there's potentially still enough time to make a Sunman debut movie by the summer of 2009.
Personally I have major issues with a superhero figure such as IRONMAN judging from it's debut feature film, points of observation that I discerned at my viewing of it. You just may agree with me when I relate to you what those objections entail.
As property owner, originator, trademark holder, writer of Sunman, I can tweak the script for instance to keep down the cost factors. Even now my debut screenplay is structured such that the first two thirds of the film doesn't need to involve too much in the way of special effects. My superhero guy's not a billionaire either who needs the super fancy lab set seen in IRONMAN as for instance... .
If anyone wants to discuss getting involved with backing my superhero SUNMAN franchise feature motion picture projects, get in touch.
Even as to things that could just be associated with them such as the creation of Sunman based thematic popular ( intended as hit ) songs. I'm open to collaboration with various artists on these.
My Regards:
Carman N. Keddy
Monday, May 5, 2008
An electro dance beat thingy called (We Are a) Dance Riot - My 3rd new song lyrics done today. PLUS just added: next day wrote song, JUST LIKE WHEN..
( We are a ) Dance Riot
- by Carman N. Keddy ( May 5th, 2008 )
This song is perhaps potentially David Bowiesque, if Dave might give it a electro beat kind of groove treatment of some sort, or something of similar ilk. Influenced anyway by Mondago. Just had idea earler in the day, that became an intent, to use the word riot in some way or other in a song, and then much later, in evening, after a listen to Mondago on their MySpace page, their kind of sound or vibe, I came up with the following:
Dance Riot
Let's start a dance riot tonight
burn down the oppression of the day
rise rise rise up the flames
shake this house afire, to the point of collapse
yes baby, we got the, freedom to move
the language of emotion, of passion
to the point of collapse in each others arms
no we not are the sheep obscure
tonight til the break of dawn
Let's start a dance riot tonight
and let the politicians talk and plot
rise rise rise up the flames
in here we are the law, oh the law of motion
yes baby, our bod-ies, touching to feel
the language of emotion, of passion
to the point of collapse in each others arms
no we not are the sheep obscure
tonight til the break of dawn
Let's start a dance riot tonight
no no, not statuesque like of stone
rise rise rise up the flames
yes baby, we feel the, heaven's elation
to the point of estasy, of rotation
the language of emotion, of passion
to the point of collapse in each others arms
no we not are the sheep obscure
tonight til the break of dawn
Let's start a dance riot
let's start a dance riot
baby we are a dance riot !
Tonight.
Let's start a dance riot
let's start a dance riot
baby we are a dance riot !
Tonight.
Long into the night the beat goes on
higher and higher, intensity growing
in a frenzy of love and (wild) abandon
there's no prison that can hold us, tonight
in here we are the law, the law of emotion
Let's start a dance riot
let's start a dance riot
baby we are a dance riot !
Tonight.
Let's start a dance riot
let's start a dance riot
baby we are a dance riot
....a dance riot yeah !!
Everyone join in our dance riot
Everyone join in our dance riot
Together.. we are the dance riot nation, tonight.
Together.. we create the laws of motion. Emotion.
Together in each other's arms.
Everyone join in our dance riot
Everyone join in our dance riot
Together.. we are the dance riot nation, tonight.
Together.. we create the laws of motion. Emotion.
Together in each other's arms.
Dance riot. Dance riot. Dance riot.
Won't stop this dance riot
Won't stop this dance riot
tonight til the break of day.
Baby
Let's start a dance riot
Let's start a dance riot.
Baby we are a dance riot.
No-one can stop this dance riot, tonight.
Not til the break of day.
Dance riot. Dance riot. Dance riot........ .
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Just Like When (We Collide):
By Carman N. Keddy ( May 6th. 2008 )
..note, after seeing today (May 6th) photo of colliding galaxies in close corners proxmity each other, and while listening to Kylie's myspace page I jotted down the following original song and lyrics. Then afterwords, when googling the line, song galaxies collide, I did note that there is one song of the title, Gallaxies Collide, but after taking a 30 sec. sample listen to that - as found here: http://music.yahoo.com/track/47219868, I found it different contextually (the other one has something to do with some shy geekish sounding guy wanting hoping to get together with a gal, as opposed to my "couple" in my song's plot, who are already the hottest couple! going...), and it's got a different sound vibe than I have in mind ( theirs is so pop innocently sweet it's almost repulsive) that along with completely different lines and words, verse structure, etc. . So I decided to keep my song as is as originately jotted down, just made sure the titles didn't "collide" by making my song called -just-Like When... .)
Just Like When :
By Carman N. Keddy ( May 6th. 2008 )
Just like when galaxies collide
that's like you and I
just a spectacular reaction
creating a fun so intense
it's like no buddy's business
let the light show begin
let the sparks fly higher higher
long into the night linger
Baby we are the fireworks, tonight
the main attraction
(just) like matter and antimatter
coming together
Baby we are the fireworks
going off off off
bang bang boom
oo oo ah
just like when galaxies collide
that's like you and I
Baby we are the fireworks
going off off off
bang bang boom
oo oo ahh
just like when glaxies collide
that's like you and I
Can't get any more incredible
that's like you and I
just a circular connection
creating a whirl so dizzying
it's like nobody's business
let the flames grow higher hotter
long into the night sizzle
Baby we are the fireworks, tonight
the main attraction
(just) like matter and antimatter
coming together
Just like when galaxies collide
that's like you and I
just a spectacular reaction
creating a heat so intense
it's like no buddy's business
let the light show begin
let the sparks fly higher higher
long into the night linger
Baby we are the fireworks, tonight
the main attraction
(just) like matter and antimatter
coming together
Baby we are the fireworks
in the sky tonight
going off off off
bang bang boom
oo oo ah
just like when galaxies collide
that's like you and I
Baby we are the fireworks
going off off off
bang bang boom
oo oo ahh
just like when glaxies collide
that's like you and I !
.. yes Baby, we are ..
The main attraction
just like matter and antimatter
coming together
Nothing and everything
in complete interaction
dancing like fools never seen
the like of on this planet
Just like nothing ever felt, shook so strong
ever ever ever ever that shone so bright
in this universe of exploding stars and galaxies
in this night of wonder (ecstasy) under the stars, tonight.
Oh
We are the main attraction
Just like matter and antimatter
coming together !
..and ..
Baby we are the fireworks
in the sky tonight
going off off off
bang bang boom
oo oo ah
just like when galaxies collide
that's like you and I
Baby we are the fireworks
in the sky tonight
going off off off
bang bang boom
oo oo ahh
just like when glaxies collide
that's like you and I
Baby we are ..
The main attraction
just like matter and antimatter
coming together
Yes Baby we are..
Yes baby we are..
Yes baby we are..
The main attraction....
Just a spectacular attraction..
We got between you and I...
Yes Baby we are..
Yes baby we are..
Yes baby we are..
Just the main attraction ! ..of all time !!
Just a spectacular attraction.
... So spectacular .
Just like when Galaxies collide...
Like when Galaxies collide
Like when Galaxies collide
Like when Galaxies collide
Like when Galaxies collide...... .
Just like when our bodies collide...
Like when our bodies collide... .
Like when our bodies collide... .
Like when our bodies collide... .
Like when our bodies collide... .
Just a spectacular attraction..
We got between you and I.
Just like when.. just like when.. just like when.. just like when....
Just like when our lips collide
just like when our hearts collide
just like when our hips collide
just like when our eyes collide
Oh just like when we collide... .
Just like when.. just like when.. just like when.. just like when....
Just got idea, new extra (bit weird but fun) twist in Sky's ( and Sunman's ) character that'll grow stronger over time.
Just wrote in few minutes Duran Duran influenced song: Hot on the Trail... .
Hot on the Trail ( of Love )
by Carman N. Keddy, May 5th, 2008
( first quick jotdown of lyrics - i.e. not rigorously edited, or even edited at all, yet )
Hot on the trail of love
gotta keep going on
picking up all the clues
else the trail will go cold, and
I'll be left out in the cold,
the cold cold night, tonight
baby this place was so hot
when you came inside
who was that gal
she rocked my world so (hard)
that mystery woman
shared a glance and a kiss
why did she leave so soon
in such a hurry to go go
leaving me standing there
at the swanky cocktail bar
at a loss for words, for my soul
picking up the pieces
of my shattered glass
..dripping wine..
oh
who was that gal
she rocked my world so (hard)
Oh I must know know who
who was this woman in blue
what was her secret under her shadow veil
why did she whisper so sweet in my ear
there'd be danger if I only knew, if I only knew,
why was there a tear in her eye
and then how she sadly smiled,
tearing out my heart for her
oh
who was that gal
she rocked my world so (hard)
..Oh, she must have known, I'd come..
Hot on the trail of love
gotta keep going on and on
picking up all the clues
else the trail will go cold, and
I'll be left out in the cold,
the cold cold night, tonight
baby this place was so hot
when you came inside.
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Now for your extra lyrics BONUS TRACK, of sorts.. . Instead of having to make a second post, thought I'd post the second song lyrics I written today right on heels of the one above ( seem to have been doing that doubling up type of spurt lately ).. . Anyway, here's the second song's lyrics ( it supposed to be earthly gothic in nature rather than on some spiritual plane, kind of in a superheroness meets supervillainess vein... ).
Fall ( ..or possibly instead: Disbelieving Eyes )
( by Carman N. Keddy, May 5th, 2008 )
She's scanning the horizon now
for that blazing ray of light
to shine in her future nights !
She's forever dwelling now
in a deepest dark ray of night
it blots out her future light !
Expect the spectacular babe
thats all I gotta say I said to her
but she said no, it can't be so
you can't remake this
broken twisted heart, this
fallen angel here in your arms.. .
And how she looked at me
with those disbelieveing eyes!
Oh how baby how she'll be surprised
when it all comes down..
she'll be looking up at the sky
shielding her disbelieving eyes!
And she'll be ever more
scanning the horizon now
again and again
for the return, the return
of the ray of blazing light
in that deepest dark future night
that's befallen her -
since she turned away
her disbelieving eyes !
How how she'll wait everynight for more
but it'll be too late, the light has passed
away from her, her chance is gone
but then again hope is never gone
just maybe just maybe, just maybe
that ray of light will return and save her
her tormented soul but would she still
turn away, look at me, with those
disbelieving eyes, thinking she'd still
bring me down, thinking I would fall
Fall with her
Fall with her
Fall with her
..fall with her, into her abyss of endless night...
Yeah
Said I could save her from her torment
but heart-torn she hadn't wanted to,
to take me down, thought I would fall
with her into her abyss of endless night
and she didn't think I could anyway
who could be so strong.. not even you
but I wouldn't let her go, not yet, I said
expect the spectacular babe
thats all I gotta say I'd said to her, but,
she had looked at me ..still.. with those..
disbelieving eyes.. .
disbelieving eyes.. .
disbelieving eyes.. .
She's scanning the horizon now
for that blazing ray of light
to shine in her future nights
She's forever dwelling now
in a deepest dark ray of night
it blots out her future light !
Since she turned away
her disbelieving eyes !
Since she turned away
her disbelieving eyes !
Since she turned away
her disbelieving eyes !
Since she turned away
her disbelieving eyes !
Her eyes.....
..thinking I, would fall fall with her..
wishing wishing wishing
wanting wanting wanting
needing needing needing
hoping hoping hoping
fearing fearing fearing
ripping ripping ripping
at her dark soul...
... that I'd !! ...
Fall for her
Fall with her
Fall for her
Fall with her
Evermore... .
Oh ah ooowww.
Her disbelieving eyes. How they tore into me too.. . So ! Couldn't let her know, maybe she'd be right all along !! Be taking me down. And I'd so so SO far...
Fall.
Fall.
Fall.
Right down into her disbelieving eyes.
Evermore.
Her disbelieving eyes.. Her disbelieving eyes. Her disbelieving eyes. Fall into her disbelieving arms, evermore.. Her disbelieving eyes. Fall. Fall. Fall. Fall. Fall. Fall............. .
Saturday, May 3, 2008
Posted 2nd new song lyrics just wrote, this for "With a Smile"
With a Smile
( by Carman N. Keddy, May3rd, 2008 )
With a smile
and nothing more
but that's ok
With a look
and nothing more
but that's just fine
With a wave hi
and nothing more
but it's alright
With a touch
and nothing more
and it's still so fine
Without a word
and everything more
but it's a dream
..because I'll know
You Gonna come
and go
I know
Gonna be
up and down
but long as
you'll alway return
long as you
will still be here
at the end
with me
Everytime
after the storm.
Everytime
you feel you need me.
Still... .
With a goodbye
and nothing more
but it's ok
With a frown
and nothing more
but I'll understand.
With a sad face
and nothing more
but I'll see through
baby I'll know...
and it'll be ok.
You gonna come
and go
I know
gonna be
up and down
but long as
you'll alway return
long as you
will still be here
at the end
with me.. .
Every time.
..after the storm.
Everytime
..you feel you need me.
Still...
With a tear on your cheek
and nothing more
but it's understood.
With a smile of glee
and nothing more
but it's all worth it then...
..Even though I'll know...
You Gonna come
and go
I know
gonna be
up and down
but long as
you'll alway return
long as you
will still be here
at the end
with me.. .
Every time.
..after the storm.
Everytime
..you feel you need me.
Still.. .
With your body
and nothing more
but it's okay
Cause...
I know..
You still Gonna come
and go
I know
gonna be
up and down
but long as
you'll alway return
long as you
will still be here
at the end
with me.. .
Every time.
..after the storm.
Everytime
..you feel you need me.
Still.. .
With your body
and nothing more
but it's okay
Cause...
I know..
You still Gonna come
and go
I know
gonna be
up and down
but long as
you'll alway return
long as you
will still be here
at the end
with me.. .
Every time.
..after the storm.
Everytime
..you feel you need me.
Still.. .
With a smile
and nothing more...
With a smile
and nothing more..
With a smile
and nothing more...
Superhero Sunman update. ( For my "Don't" song lyrics, see my previous blog post )
Once SUNMAN takes off - think how big the intellectual properties such as Spiderman, Star Wars, Batman, Superman currently are, to get a sense of how big I believe, and am determined to make be, my superhero Sunman franchise and property will ascend - all this twiddling stuff annoying me now will be all that much yesterday's burnt toast.
A Kate Voegele influenced new song lyric I just wrote: Dont
Don't.. ( really good odds may change title to Beaming with a Smile or: With a Smile ? )
( by Carman N. Keddy, May 3rd, 2008 )
Don't drop the ball
on the game
don't close your eyes
to the light shining
(off) on the horizon
even if it seems
so impossibly far away
every step you take
on the road there
getting you closer
until one day
you'll be standing tall
under that sun too
..beaming with a smile
Don't kick the can
on your dreams
don't lose your sense
of the hope
cause baby you can
-and-
cause baby you will
cause baby you're strong
If you just let youself be
all that you will be, you will be
if only you always believe
in who you are
and that's someone
who's got it gonna on !
Don't throw it down
on the ground
don't shun the joy
in the days awaiting
off on the horizon
even if it seems
so impossibly far away
every step you take
on the road there
getting you closer
until one day
you'll be standing tall
under that sun too
..beaming with a smile
And isn't it all better that way
to hope to trust to feel it's in you..
beats crying on the pity you been swallowing
nobody can be sad, down and out
unless they let it descend all on them
without fighting biting scratching
to lift the shroud that don't belong on them
just try to get beyond all that crap
time will sweep it all away anyway
just wait and see, and off go go go
see just how far you can soar..
above it all, a little more everyday.
.. beaming with a smile.
Don't kick the can
on your dreams
don't lose your sense
of the hope
cause baby you can
-and-
cause baby you will
cause baby youre strong
If you just let youself be
all that you will be, you will be
if only you'll always believe
in who you are
and that's someone
who's got it gonna on !
Don't throw it down
on the ground
don't shun the joy
in the days awaiting
on the horizon
even if it seems
so impossiby far away
every step you take
on the road there
getting you closer
until one day
you'll be standing tall
under that sun too
..beaming with a smile
Friday, May 2, 2008
Wrote new song lyrics: Gonna still be Ok, anyway.
Basically what did was take that line as the cornerstone, with that sort of context, and while influenced with the musical stains of Murray and Campbell resonating, and while listening to Galveston, and later Witchita Lineman, while fiddling a little bit more, I wrote the following:
Gonna Still Be Ok (or alternatively "Gonna Be Still OK", re title & anywhere in lyrics < swapable)
( by Carman N. Keddy, May, 2nd, 2008, and dedicated to all the survivors who carry on, despite whatever circumstances and trials, when they got each other and themselves still to hold onto, the most important thing. )
Gonna still be ok, anyway
even though gonna run for cover
anytime the thunder rolls again
anytime the sky darkens on the way
got the strength inside to carry on
Got to believe got to trust
that we got what it takes, always
no matter what comes along
as long as we have each other
we'll get by, we're gonna be fine
gonna still be okay, anyway.
When you put your hand in mine...
And.. gonna still be OK, when:
Anytime on the river it rains
there's a flood gonna rise above the banks
And.. anytime a spark ignites
the flames searing through everything before
got the strength inside to carry on.
Gonna be okay still anyway ..
Got to believe got to trust
that we got what it takes always
no matter what comes along
as long as we have each other
we'll get by we're gonna be just fine
gonna still be okay, anyway
When I put my hand in yours...
And.. Gonna still be OK, when:
No matter what time rolls along
getting older, days gettin short for the world
and in a way we never been before
at some future time of strife yet
got the strength inside to carry on.
Gonna still be ok, anyway.
When together our hands still intertwine
after it all, after it all..
Gonna still be ok, anyway.
Got to believe got to trust
that we got what it takes, always
no matter what comes along
as long as we have each other
we'll get by we're gonna be fine
gonna still be okay, anyway.
Ok anyway......
Anyway, anyway....... .
Thursday, May 1, 2008
After that biz proposal stuff (see last post), chilled out by making new song lyrics: 365 days
( by Carman N. Keddy, written May 1st, 2008, over a few minutes)
365 days a year..oh
you show me how to live
everything in the big sky
more colours of blue
everything more wondrously alive
365 days a smile..as
you push me to the edge
everything in-side of me
more colours of new
everything more wondrously.. on the line
365 days a tear..that
will never fall from my eyes
everything in the way I feel
more colours of joy
everything more wondrously, right
365 days a year, yeah
that I will Ne-ver fear
everything in the big Sun
more colors of flame
everthing more wondrously alive
365 days a year, and
not one thing to re-gret
everything in your bright blue.. eyes
more colours of love
everything ( I feel ) more wondrously alive
365 days a year
you show me how to be (like you)
everything in the blue sky
more colours of true
everything more wondrously.. you are to me.
365 days a year
365 days a year
365 days a year
you show me how to live
you make me feel so alive
everything more wonderously
you are to me
Just can't wait for another..
365 days a year
365 days a year
365 days a year
another
365 days with you.
and another
365 days more..
and another
365 days more..
and another
365 days more..
365 days with you.
oooo oo
oooo oo
365 days with you.
( only in this FOLLOWING part here is 365 Not pronounced: three hundred sixty five with NO AND, but instead is just pronounced as: Three Six Five - I've indicated this as 3....6....5 )
365 ( 3...6....5 )
365 ( 3..6....5 )
365 ( " " )
365 ""
365 ""
365 ""
365 "" days with you.
three hundred sixty five days,
oh yeah.
A concept for taking my SUNMAN franchise superhero figure and TM into the big leagues of superheroes - by a 100 small ways.
A concept for taking my SUNMAN franchise superhero figure and TM into the big leagues of superheroes - by a 100 small ways.
**
Here's a concept that potential backers, and potential key personnal for a mutual production company entity, for my superhero Sunman feature projects and franchise superhero figure might consider towards my goal of getting the first two Sunman related feature motion pictures into a production scenario, intended for subsequent wide release, asap:
I'd like to get the cameras rolling asap on superhero Sunman based feature motion picture, wide release, projects. Towards that end, a significant input of capital could be employed, an amount that could also be utilized in such a way as to recoup itself, and perhaps generate a return over and above that amount, while also getting the Sunman movies into production by the use of the capital employed, the primary goal to be achieved.
Even as the actual print cost of a (wide release) movie is relatively insignificant re the overall P and A budget of any significantly enough sized movie, a amount of a similar hue to enable a major movie franchise to get realized in the first place could be considered in the same way. To start the consideration I'd thought I'd consider an amount that understated the seriousness of the effort, yet though relatively, in the overscope of things, could be considered not all that significant. An amount of 1 million dollars.
Utilization of (my) registered trademark for Sunman as regards some items alone should generate revenue streams sufficient to recoup an amount of this extent. If the 1 million were broken down into manageable bits, lets say 100 parts re initiatives or support items, marketing & packaging or deal forging etc. items, mini production projects, logoed wares (or design work on) to be made available to sell, etc., each kicking in at $10,000 budgeted per item, that's 100 tentacles associated to my superhero figure reaching out far and wide to heighten the profile & public demand, hopefully clamor, for my trademarked superhero franchise.
Like a Hollywood Studo with a number of projects in it's line-up mix, many that fail but some that succeed, spectacularly, this Capital for Sunman small initiatives could have the same result (with much magnitudes less the relative risk) . With all the superhero fare this Summer, there's a huge appetite for things superhero, and a need for things superhero that are NEW-ly original, current, and fresh!
Any backer wih sufficient means, who'd work closely with me, with planning & determining & realizing the most promising of the superhero Sunman initiatives, the most needed support items, and the showcasing small projects, & with the marketing, packaging, & deal forging initiatives, that will be bartered about & discussed, that's 100 steps up to the plate to hit my Sunman superhero franchise ball out of the ball park, & for getting both the origin debut movie and the 1st PQ into a production scenario.
The number of support items, relative to the overall 100 cracks at the plate would be relatively few. A few folks to assist me with a few matters, script interchange, some design and art work visualizations, culling actors for potential roles, directorial support, those sort of things.
So...think:
SUPERHERO FRANCHISE, groundwork, historical perspectives, registered trademark, copyrighted works, laid in place, engine idling, ready to race into the ranks of the major superhero pop icons !
Consider just one of the 100 initiative items that could be realized, Sunman based theme songs ( likely a number of choices could be enabled). As the intent would be to create highly captivating pop, or rock, or hiphop, whatever songs, with hit potential, the possibility of this song or even up to a few more, that one item alone, would have a considerable impact, and create a significant return.
What all the initiatives would have is a foundation on which to exist, a marketable base that can connect to a wide audience. On an iconic ( the SUN ) so familiar to relate to trademark, banner, concept, label, franchise, vibe, energy, spectacular whirl of expectations raised, on a platform of the promise of a fresh new wondrous superhero franchise.
More later... .
